13 avril 2012

ROLE MODEL.

Today in class, we have speaking about our role model .

 

I have not a particular model but if I would have to give the name of the person that I respect, I'll say without hesitating my grand mother . Because she was smiling every time , even if she had problems, I never heard she "I'm not happy today, because blablabla.." . She looks after every my cousins, she had her own personality, she was fantastic, generous, patient and so attentive ! She had special vision of the life, she benefited of every moments, when I was child I don't understood exactly why, but now, I realize. Unfortunately, I haven't had the chance to know more things about she, but my memories say me that she was, and she is yet, incredible !

Posté par camilleenglish à 17:11 - Commentaires [1] - Permalien [#]


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    Terrific.

    I think you made a great description of HER as a role model.

    Mind your pronouns (you forgot to use 'her' several times)

    Posté par heiser, 11 juin 2012 à 11:29 | | Répondre
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